Today in Te Au Whanui we are doing another persuasive writing. The topic for this period is ice cream is better than cake. Here is my writing.
I agree that ice cream is better than cake. The reason I think that ice cream is better than cake is that cake is boring and plain. Unlike ice cream has different flavours and it mixes well with lots of things. One of the things I think is good with cake is ice cream. Ice cream is really nice with cake but it depends on the type of it. One of my favourite flavours of cake is ice cream or really nice chocolate. Some of my favourite flavours of ice cream are cookies n cream, churros, chocolate chip, caramel and more. Then are just some of my favourite flavours but there is more. One of the things I like about cake is when there is stuff on to like cream and fruits. I also like when the cake is coloured because it makes it not so boring and plain. Some of the things I like with ice cream is cream and fruit. When you mix ice cream and cream together it makes it like a runnier texture. This is why I think ice cream is better than cake.
I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Wednesday, 23 June 2021
Ice cream Is Better Than Cake
Labels:
2021,
Hurumanu 3,
Term 2,
Week 8
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