I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Kia Ora Carla it is Lacie and Liv I like your blog post you made and I think you did a great job on the word splat and describing the words we were given in your own words.
Hello Carla I really like how you used you own words I think you could have added more details but it looks good. Do you think you could have done anything better next time in you opinion.
It's great to see you've gotten some feedback from your peers - make sure to reply to their comments! I enjoy the clear layout of your splat page. When I click on the poster to enlarge it, I can clearly read your definitions.
I look forward to seeing how you will explore your own culture through our new kete.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say. Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about.
Kia Ora Carla it is Lacie and Liv
ReplyDeleteI like your blog post you made and I think you did a great job on the word splat and describing the words we were given in your own words.
Hi Lacie and Liv
DeleteThank you. I didnt have much for the culture ones but I still put something down for it.
- Carla
Hello Carla I really like how you used you own words I think you could have added more details but it looks good. Do you think you could have done anything better next time in you opinion.
ReplyDeleteHello Jesse
DeleteI would have added more detail if I knew more about it. Next time I could make it bigger and more prettier.
- Carla
Kia ora Carla
ReplyDeleteIt's great to see you've gotten some feedback from your peers - make sure to reply to their comments! I enjoy the clear layout of your splat page. When I click on the poster to enlarge it, I can clearly read your definitions.
I look forward to seeing how you will explore your own culture through our new kete.
- Miss Birtch
Hello Miss Birtch
DeleteThank you I tied to make it in a clear layout and easy to read.
- Carla