I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Wow that is so amazing the pictures look great, who is chocolate? is it the candy chocolate? or is it a brown dog? by the way it reminds me of my friend who wanted to be called chocolate in a game.
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Wow that is so amazing the pictures look great, who is chocolate? is it the candy chocolate? or is it a brown dog? by the way it reminds me of my friend who wanted to be called chocolate in a game.
ReplyDeleteChocolate is a friend of candy the dog
ReplyDeleteOh! ok it looks good what are the other characters? I haven't seen it! I only know what the first character looks like is it chocolate?
ReplyDeleteThere is 2 more characters the 1 one is lolly and the 2 one is carly
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