I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Today in science we had to create a simple to complex sentence. We had to add 1 of these on a sentence Adjective, When, Where, How and Why (exsample) The dog was hungry. The dog was angry and hunger. Here is my work
Great job explaining the task and I really like the way you have highlighted the different parts we added on. You did a nice job with your sentences. Did you enjoy this activity?
Thank you it was really hard to explain it. I did the highlighting so you know what you added on to the sentence. Thank you I was hard to get it to match the sentence and find the right words. I loved this activity and I hope we can do it again.
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Kia ora Carla
ReplyDeleteGreat job explaining the task and I really like the way you have highlighted the different parts we added on. You did a nice job with your sentences. Did you enjoy this activity?
- Miss Birtch
Hi Miss Birtch
DeleteThank you it was really hard to explain it. I did the highlighting so you know what you added on to the sentence. Thank you I was hard to get it to match the sentence and find the right words. I loved this activity and I hope we can do it again.
- Carla
Hi Carla
ReplyDeleteIts me haylee here and i really like what you have included and i hope you have a great year
Kind regards,
Haylee
Hi Haylee
DeleteThanks it was hard to create. Have a great year.
- Carla