Creative Writing

Last week we had to do creative writing about a picture about snowy mountains in Canada because my teacher was getting home sick. Here is my writing

Big snowy mountains and snowy trees all around me and filling my view. As I look more around, I see some water and I wonder if the water is cold or warm. Around the water, there is more snowy tree and snowy big mountains. I change my eyes for the beautiful view to the ground. There is not much on the ground just snow and some tiny bits of green and some leaves. My dog, Milo starts to run around looking like a goofy horse. I'm not surprised that he started running around, he hasn't been out of the house much since it's been too cold for him and we didn't have a coat for him. Most of the time we only go out because Milo loves the outdoors.

Milo keeps running around like a goofy horse but not as goofy as before. He starts to slow down when he gets to the water. Milo hasn't been around water much because we don't go to the beach much, if we do we just walk along the sand with him. Milo is a purebred chocolate labrador. His eyes are like melted dark chocolate. Milo is tall and skinny like a greyhound. He has a soft coat and a fluffy tail so lots of people want to touch him but he doesn't want them to touch him. Milo is not like other dogs and loves people, he hates other people and dogs its just the way he is. We don't take Milo to dog parks because he would bark at everyone and chase them around. 

When Milo went into the water he starts to get stealthy which is unusual for him. He only gets stealthy when there is an animal here and he doesn't like it. Soon enough he starts growling loud at the water. Milo starts slowly backing out of the water. The animal in water starts following milo out of the water.

Different Types Of Sentence

Today I have to explain the different types of sentence types you all reading. If you don't know what a very short sentence or w start or adverb start, they are type of sentences that you can use when writing. Very short sentence mean is were that sentence only have 5 or less words. W Start means where you have a word that starts with a W like While, When Where, eg. Adverb Start means the sentence with a word that ends with a ly like Quickly, Nervously, Sadly, Angrily, Joyfully. The different types of sentences we learnt were:

• Very short sentence
• W-Start
• Adverb Start ( -ly )

Here are some examples of the sentence.

Very Short sentence: 

You can grow plants in soil.

You can grow plants in beakers.

The W Start:

When you grow plants in a beaker, it won't be as big if its in soil.

When you grow plants in soil, it will be bigger then when you grow it in a beaker.

Adverb Start:

Nervously, the kids sat in the science room waiting, for the teacher to say that they finished it.

Quietly, the kids sat in the science room while the teacher explain what to do with the seed and beaker.

  

Very Short Sentence

Today in Hurumanu 3 Writing/Science we learnt about more types of sentences so we know different types of to start a sentences. We had to learn about this so we know more type of sentences to start and if they need to start with adverb or additive. We had to write 3 very short sentence, 3 the w-start and adverb start then we had to write a paragraph with 1x w start, 2x adverb start and 1x very short sentence in the paragraph . Here is my work.

5 Ways to Write a Sentence

Today in science we had to create a simple to complex sentence. We had to add 1 of these on a sentence Adjective, When, Where, How and Why  (exsample) The dog was hungry. The dog was angry and hunger. Here is my work