I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Today in science we had to create a simple to complex sentence. We had to add 1 of these on a sentence Adjective, When, Where, How and Why (exsample) The dog was hungry. The dog was angry and hunger. Here is my work
Thank you it was really hard to explain it. I did the highlighting so you know what you added on to the sentence. Thank you I was hard to get it to match the sentence and find the right words. I loved this activity and I hope we can do it again.
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Hi Carla
ReplyDeleteIts me haylee here and i really like what you have included and i hope you have a great year
Kind regards,
Haylee
Hi Haylee
DeleteThanks it was hard to create. Have a great year.
- Carla
Hi Miss Birtch
ReplyDeleteThank you it was really hard to explain it. I did the highlighting so you know what you added on to the sentence. Thank you I was hard to get it to match the sentence and find the right words. I loved this activity and I hope we can do it again.
- Carla