Buddy Writing - Free Writing

For writing 2 weeks we did a buddy writing I worked with a girl named Riansha, we did a story about a girl named ¨Olivia¨ she wanted a pet but her parents said that she had to take care of it, but she finds a Giraffe and decided to keep it, soon later her parents found out the she had a Giraffe. I found it hard to do the conclusion. I found it easy to get the ideas for the writing. Tell me what you like about the story and any feedback to help us. Here is my writing

Friends Forever

Before

There was a girl named Olivia she wanted a pet cat but her parents told her “that if she get a pet you have to take care of it and do lots of work like give it a shower clean it take it out for a walk all that stuff” but Olivia did not care.

Middle:

Soon later Olivia found a door because she followed the Butterfly it was a rare butterfly and she found a secret door. she went through it and found a giraffe she decided to take it, she slowly put a shock collar around the Giraffe's neck soon there was storm they quickly ran back to the door and made it out safely.

After:

Olivia named the giraffe “Rose.” ¨what a cute name.¨ her grandma said Olivia got shocked after she went to put the giraffe in the backyard, she went to get some leaves for the giraffe soon they became friends. Later they had no food

it got late and they had no place to stay and no food, they found this creepy dark place that they maybe could stay in they went back home Olivia’s parents soon found out that there was a giraffe in their backyard, Olivia's parents let her keep it for a couple of years, they went back to the forest to see Roses family, Roses family came so Olivia’s parents decided to buy a farm so there will be more space for the giraffes magically other.

To Be Continued…

😃By Riansha And Carlala😃