I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Last term in Miss Williamson Literary group we had to make a poem the rhyme. .I found it hard to make my work rhyme. I found it easy to get the ideas on. Here is my work. I hope you like it.
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Great peom carla it sounds like milo
ReplyDeleteThanks Mum(I think)
ReplyDeleteI tried my best to make it sound like Milo