I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi Carla Nici Here I really like how you made a poem about love and then took Mr M's Challenge, I did to. Maybe Next time you could use a different image not just a few hearts with lines in it. How Did You Get Those images?
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Hi Carla Nici Here
ReplyDeleteI really like how you made a poem about love and then took Mr M's Challenge, I did to. Maybe Next time you could use a different image not just a few hearts with lines in it. How Did You Get Those images?
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i made then why
DeleteHey Carla your opposite story is very cool i like the way you did the opposite off love cause it sooo cool bye!
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