I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi Carla, My name is Mia from Yaldhurst Model School, I love this post because it tells me how you feel about the war. It's very sad that your Grandad didn't see his dad for a long time. What I think you should do is make sure it fits in the page.
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this is my Anzac feeling´s about the war.
Hi Carla, My name is Mia from Yaldhurst Model School, I love this post because it tells me how you feel about the war. It's very sad that your Grandad didn't see his dad for a long time. What I think you should do is make sure it fits in the page.
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Mia
thank yea it is sad that my granddads dad bied
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